How to Write Concise Sentences: 7 Steps With Examples

How do you write concise sentences? Put the person or thing acting first, give it one strong verb, and cut every word that doesn't change the meaning. That's the whole method. The hard part is spotting wordiness in your own draft, because padding tends to sound natural when you're the one who wrote it. The seven steps below each target one kind of padding, with a short before-and-after example. At the end, you'll see one real paragraph go from 58 words to 21 with nothing important lost.

What a good concise sentence does

A concise sentence isn't simply a short one. It's a sentence where every word carries weight. The Purdue Online Writing Lab puts it this way: interrogate every word, and delete or replace any word that doesn't add something important.

Good concise sentences share three traits:

• The reader knows who does what by the first few words. The subject and verb come early and close together.
• The verb does the work. "Decide" instead of "make a decision". "Analyze" instead of "perform an analysis of".
• Nothing is said twice. No redundant pairs, no qualifiers that add no meaning, no long introductions before the point.

Concision helps every reader, but especially people reading on a phone, readers whose first language isn't English, and anyone skimming. The US government's plain language guidance makes the same case: active voice makes it clear who should do what, and hidden verbs make writing longer than necessary.

7 steps to write concise sentences

1. Find the real action and make it the verb

Wordy sentences often hide the action inside a noun, usually one ending in -tion, -ment or -ance. Plain language writers call these hidden verbs. Find the noun, turn it back into a verb, and the extra words fall away.

• Before: The team conducted an investigation into the cause of the delay. (11 words)
• After: The team investigated the cause of the delay. (8 words)

Other common ones: "give consideration to" → "consider", "reach a conclusion" → "conclude", "provide assistance" → "help".

2. Put the doer first (use active voice)

In passive voice, the person acting moves to the end or disappears. That costs words, and it costs clarity. The UNC Writing Center uses this example:

• Before: The letter was taken to the mailbox by Sally.
• After: Sally took the letter to the mailbox.

Passive voice isn't always wrong. It works when the doer is unknown or doesn't matter ("The building was finished in 1902"). But if you can name who acted, name them first.

3. Swap long phrases for single words

English is full of stock phrases that take four or five words to say what one word already says. They sound formal, which is why they creep into essays and work emails.

• Before: We postponed the launch due to the fact that testing was not complete. (13 words)
• After: We postponed the launch because testing wasn't finished. (8 words)

4. Cut redundant pairs and repeated meanings

Some pairs say the same thing twice: "each and every", "first and foremost", "basic and fundamental". Some modifiers repeat what the word already means: "plan ahead", "end result", "past history", "anticipate in advance". Keep one word and drop the echo.

• Before: The end result of our past history with this supplier is that we plan ahead. (15 words)
• After: Because of our history with this supplier, we plan ahead. (10 words)

5. Delete empty qualifiers and openers

Words like very, really, quite, basically, actually and kind of rarely add meaning. Sentence openers like "There are", "It is important to note that" and "I think that" delay the point.

• Before: It is important to note that there are really quite a few errors in the report. (16 words)
• After: The report has many errors. (5 words)

If a qualifier carries real meaning, like "probably" when you aren't sure, keep it. The test is whether the sentence means something different without it.

6. Choose specific words over vague ones

A vague word usually needs other words to prop it up. A specific word does the job alone. Purdue's example shows the effect:

• Before: The politician talked about several of the merits of after-school programs in his speech. (14 words)
• After: The politician touted after-school programs in his speech. (8 words)

"Touted" means "talked about the merits of", so the rest of the phrase can go.

7. Split or combine sentences so each holds one idea

Concise doesn't mean cramming. If a sentence holds two ideas joined by "and" or "which", try splitting it. If two short sentences repeat the same subject, try combining them.

• Split: The new schedule, which was approved last week after a long discussion, starts Monday and replaces the old rota, which caused overtime. → The new schedule starts Monday. It replaces the old rota, which caused overtime.
• Combine: Our office is in Leeds. Our office has 40 staff. → Our Leeds office has 40 staff.

Read the result aloud. If you run out of breath or lose track of the subject, the sentence is still too long.

A worked example: 58 words to 21

Here's a paragraph of the kind that turns up in reports and cover letters:

In my opinion, I think it is very important to note that there are a large number of customers who have made complaints about the fact that the delivery times are basically too long, and in order to deal with this issue, a decision was made by the team to conduct a full review of the current process.

That's 58 words. Applying the steps in order:

1. Hidden verbs (step 1): "made complaints" → "complained", "a decision was made" → "decided", "conduct a full review" → "fully review".
2. Active voice (step 2): "a decision was made by the team" → "the team decided".
3. Long phrases (step 3): "a large number of" → "many", "in order to" → "to".
4. Redundancy (step 4): "In my opinion, I think" says the same thing twice, and the reader knows it's your view anyway. Cut both.
5. Empty openers (step 5): delete "it is very important to note that there are" and "basically".
6. Split (step 7): separate the problem from the response.

Many customers complained that deliveries take too long. To fix this, the team decided to fully review the process.

That's 19 words. You could stop there, but a cover letter or report may need slightly more detail, such as "the current delivery process". Concision is about removing waste, not removing information, so add back what the reader needs:

Many customers complained that deliveries take too long. To fix this, the team decided to fully review the current delivery process.

The final version is 21 words, less than half the original, and it says more clearly who did what.

Mistakes to avoid

• Cutting meaning along with the padding. If a detail answers who, what, when or how much, it's not filler. Check each edit against the original.
• Writing only very short sentences. A paragraph of five-word sentences sounds robotic and hides how ideas connect. Mix lengths on purpose.
• Swapping plain words for rare ones. "Utilize" is longer than "use" and no more precise. Concise usually means plainer, not fancier.
• Editing while drafting. Get the ideas down first, then edit for concision in a separate pass. Trying to do both at once often stalls the writing.
• Over-trusting any tool. Grammar checkers and AI rewriters can suggest shorter versions, but they can also drop a nuance you needed. Read every suggestion before you accept it, and follow your school's or employer's rules on using AI for your work.

For more on structuring the paragraphs these sentences sit in, see the Essay Writer app. If you need to shorten a whole document rather than single sentences, a summarizing app is a better fit.

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Conclusion

Writing concise sentences comes down to a few habits. Put the doer first, make the action the verb, swap long phrases for single words, and cut anything that repeats or adds nothing. Then check that the sentence still says everything it needs to. You don't need to apply all seven steps to every sentence. Run through them once when you edit, and you'll catch most of the padding. After a few documents, you'll start writing tighter first drafts too.